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We are a class of grade 4 and 5 children in Brisbane, Australia. We have 10 boys and 17 girls in our class. We want to share our learning with others. Please leave a comment on our blog.

Sunday, October 18, 2009

MYST

We have been using the video game "MYST" during our writing block to help improve our descriptive writing. While "doing" the game we have been writing in our 'Myst Journals" as well as writing a range of poetry. We have made some voice threads so that we can share our "Haiku Poems". Haiku poems are very tricky to write. They are 3 lines long, the first line has to have 5 syllables, the second line has to have 7 syllables and the third line has to have 5 syllables. Haiku poems come from Japan and are usually written about nature. Leave us a comment and let us know what you think of our poems!







2 comments:

Anonymous said...

To 4/5R,

I like the haiku poems. And think the way you published them was cool. I'll keep that in mind 5,7,5 Keep up the good work and keep blogging!!!


Maddie C. 4/5R

Anonymous said...

HI 45R
I LIKE THE HAIKU POEMS.THEY ARE ALL VERY GOOD.KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
SOPHIE